Showing posts with label character names. Show all posts
Showing posts with label character names. Show all posts

Tuesday, October 11, 2011

TUESDAY BRINGS TROUBLE

Drawing from Real Life


Most fiction writers draw on their own experiences and people in their life to help create their stories and give them life. And I’m no different. While I have never intentionally based any of my characters on family or friends, except that is for Sergei, Meg Harris’s black standard poodle who is as loving and as mischievous as on my own standard poodle, I do drawn on aspects from my own life. I thought I would share some of these with you, starting with Meg herself.

Since the Meg Harris series is written in the first person point of view, readers often ask if Meg is me. Invariably I reply “No, not really”, which is indeed the case. After all she is a red head, an escapee from an abusive marriage and she struggles with a drinking problem, none of which could be used to describe me. But like me, she did grow up in Toronto and she has a cottage.

However, while both our cottages are made from logs and are set in the wilds of West Quebec, I gave Meg Three Deer Point, the cottage of my dreams; a large turn-of-the-century timber and stone building with a turret and wraparound verandah that is perched on a granite point overlooking the sometimes still and other times angry waters of Echo Lake. That is another fun aspect of writing fiction; you can give your characters belongings and experiences that you have only dreamed about.

In the first book, Death’s Golden Whisper, Meg discovers letters and postcards written by her Great-aunt Agatha to a friend during her grand tour of Europe undertaken shortly before the First World War. I borrowed this idea from my grandfather, who during a similar European trip sent his mother postcards of his travels. As I child I spent many an intriguing hour reading these postcards and imaging what it would have been like traveling to these exotic locations. In the same book Meg also finds a diary written by her Great-aunt. Instead of arbitrarily using any date for the entries, I used the month and day of the birthdates of various members of my family.

I also have fun with names. Meg herself is named after my grandmother. I wanted a name that could be shortened to a number of different nicknames and Margaret fit the requirement; besides I wanted to immortalize my favourite grandmother. In Arctic Blue Death, her mother’s cook calls her Maggie, the name my grandmother often went by. In Red Ice for a Shroud she’s called by the French version, Marguerite, which incidentally means ‘daisy’. Her last name ‘Harris’ is derived from the street I grew up on in Toronto, ‘Harrison Rd.’

In each of my books, I also make a point of naming one or two secondary characters after my various nieces and nephews. In Arctic Blue Death, I named Meg’s father and her uncle after my grandfather and great-uncle, her sister after my mother, while I gave a fictitious Arctic town the name James Lake, after my husband. And I must not forget that one of my villains uses one of my father’s names. If he were still alive I know he would be laughing uproariously.

I enjoy spending much of my time in Canada’s great outdoors and have used some of my adventures in my books. Red Ice for a Shroud starts off with Meg and Eric clearing cross-country skiing trails, something my husband and I, along with friends, do every fall in preparation for a winter of skiing. And I do love skiing, an activity Meg thoroughly enjoys too.

Canoeing is another matter. In The River Runs Orange Meg finds herself paddling madly down a whitewater river and she dumps, which pretty much mirrors my own experience with whitewater paddling. In fact Meg doesn’t like whitewater anymore than I do, although we both love slicing through the still, flat waters of a lake.

There are countless other instances in the Meg Harris books where I have drawn upon my own experiences, but I will save those for you to discover.



Described by the Ottawa Citizen as “one of the best new voices in the mystery business”, Ottawa author, RJ Harlick, writes the Meg Harris mystery series set in the wilds of West Quebec. And like her heroine Meg Harris, RJ loves nothing better than to roam the forests surrounding her own wilderness cabin or paddle the endless lakes and
rivers. But unlike Meg, she doesn’t find a body at every twist and turn, although she certainly likes to put them in Meg’s way. There are currently four books in the series. The fifth, A Green Place for Dying, will be published in February, 2012.

Tuesday, March 22, 2011

TUESDAY BRINGS TROUBLE

Characters

Good or bad, love ‘em or hate ’em, we can’t write mysteries without creating good characters. For me, choosing great character names is (second to the plot) what I enjoy most about the whole writing process.

We’re not working with a screenplay for movies or TV, so we don’t have actors to pronounce a name for us. It’s essential to me that the reader be able to pronounce the names I put in print. Fred is simple, Fredricka is probably a woman, while Friedrich is kinda like “fried rich.” Let’s be honest, you’ve all read a book with strange-sounding names. So I say all names out loud, sometimes I try them out on friends.

But that’s basic. The real challenge is to find fascinating names that are also pronounceable to readers. Fred, Barbara, Louise, common-place names always sound so . . . so common-place. I admit to a bit of bias in favor of the exotic, but I’m not able to create exotic names without a lot of help.

Movies remain a great source. When the credits roll at the beginning (or these days, at the end), I’m agog at the myriad possibilities that scroll before me. Some of my best character names come from combinations of first and last names.

It’s a challenge to take a foreign name and weave it into my novels, which are set in the southwest US. I admit it’s easier to blend them in because of the wide range of nationalities out here: Mexico is just 60 miles to the south, I’m surrounded by at least five native American nations. But that’s my locale; yours is undoubtably also culturally rich. Try adding a character with an exotic name in your next book.

I’m influenced by simple sources. Like roadside signs. Once, passing a dirt road named Chavez Siding, I instantly realized I had a name for a bad, bad character: Chavez Sliding. Watching people at an airport, I look for distinguishing marks - this led to another bad man named Charley Thumb. I’ve also taken names off old billboards.

Finally, I decide that somewhere in every book I’ll have at least one definitely foreign character. In these cases, where I’ve already “built” a character, I need the name before I can send the book off to my editor. In Ransom My Soul, novel #8, I have a group of criminals from the Ukraine; this started out simply because my GI doctor is Borys, a Ukrainian. The assistant US attorney became Quong Ma, a Vietnamese, a name taken from a newspaper article.

I realize all this sounds a bit over-the-top. Perhaps. But the long slogslogslog of writing a novel over months and months takes a bit of fancy to keep me interested in certain characters.

Who knows, some day I may “borrow” one of your character names because it sounds wonderful.


David Cole is overcoming five years of procrastinations and is finally attacking his eighth novel, Ransom My Soul - a somewhat bleak novel of home invasions, drug cartels and human smuggling in southern Arizona, tempered (hopefully) with a fine romance and love story. David's short story, JaneJohnDoe.com, is featured in Indian Country Noir (Akashic Press); he's also working on several non-fiction books about law enforcement, including The Blue Ceiling, a compilation of personal stories about women in law enforcement.